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truthfully this needs to be re-edited, your exposure on the white is too much, you made the grain visible, your focal point is really blurred and out of focus, the photographs composition is great it could be a tad bit symmetrical but thats more of a personal choice, if you need help send me an email, i can help you out, the image looks flat, if you make changes you can get a depth of field effect a-lot better also take a silhouette into consideration it would really help compliment the piece and make it portfolio worthy and remember less is more!