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December 3, 2012
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:iconold-scorpio1979:
Again, you make me write a critique about a very moving image.

Vision 5/5: For me, perhaps for many people of my generation, the countryside is a lost childhood paradise. I personally dream of returning there, despite knowing that it's not the same anymore... (That's why I probably never will go back...)

Originality 4/5: I don't know if you've ever seen it, but there's a scene very similar in atmosphere with your photograph in an old Romanian film ("Trecatoarele iubiri"/"Transient affairs"). Anyway, I believe that its resonance within me is owed exactly to reminding, not of the film, but of my own childhood.

Technique 5/5: What I llike most is the character being shot from the back - we are left to guess her expression. The framing is very good, and the exposure, in your usual manner, on the bright side - I'm used to it. The fact that there's no sun makes no difference, it's rather the way everything melts into the bright sky that matters. Even the paved path leads somewhere away, outside of the gate, but the character is still at the beginning of it.

Impact 5/5: The subject matter and the technique will certainly mean a lot, even for people who are not in my (and your) generation. This image has a value in itself, and I believe a lot of different people are going to appreciate it.
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:iconkgbistas:
1. I liked chose of position, but something is missing in
2. perspective. Very nice emotion, big like dor that.
3. But what is really annoying, it's tempting to black and white, for me needed more aggresive coulors.
4. This is good for the journalistic photos that themselves speak for emotion, no need text or sound. You see and listen what talk about this moment.
5. When eyes in the middle and up of photo need more contrast and were is the sun? Or idea without sun? :)
And for the finish, Luiza Lazar. Really you are doing a great job and I love your photos. Always look what you upload new ;)
Keep up good work. Big + from me.
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:iconluminaascunsa:
E frumos si liniste, nici eu n-as pleca!: )
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*LuizaLazar Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:) :thanks:
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