Without a doubt this critique will do almost nothing for you! I am sure I must be rating this too high for a true professional's tastes, but I apologize since I am, after all, just an amateur. I praise you for this!
Vision: Gorgeous, lovely, absolutely perfect. The title fits this so very well, I really do feel Trapped in Time! It's a very nostalgic atmosphere, beautiful aesthetics I must say. It seems so. . . Happy, spiritual even (I'm not saying anything by that, I'm just saying it's very. . . That.), and fantasy-like.
Originality: Well, there are many like this but this one does have a lot of differences with the others as well so I'm going to refrain from commenting on this one too much.
Technique: I am in almost no way a photographer, but this is really just brilliant and so I'm not sure how I should appraise your photography and manipulating skills ^^'
Impact: . . . Well, I was definitely impacted
Overall it was absolutely great. I'll probably get some unfairs for just being so meh about this, but I really do only have praise for this D: Sorry